"Freedom at last"

In this image  is see girl jumping up in the air. It seems something happened that made her really happy, exited for her life. The form of the girls body is very interesting for the human eye in my point. I think it would capture audience if the girls body would be straight.  Behind the main focus of the image we see some shapes which also adds to the prospective of the picture.

In this image i tried to have all her body. However, part of her leg and arm was cut. I believe if those two elements were there the picture would have been better composed. In the left hand side of the image we see that its has more light.  It seems that she was running and then jumped in direction of the sun. For the most part the image is in focus. I believe i dida good job of conveying the story of the image. This picture is clear, there are not object that can distract the audience of the main focus of the image. 

"Relax"

" This such a beautiful image, flowers are in focus and the girl make this image interesting, and it makes the audience think of the what is happening in the image." 

 

"Go Mexico Go"

"Pensive"

     

I see, a beautiful girl looking at the horizon. Her face expression seems like she is looking for something that she did have but lost. I also see car that is far away from the girl in the picture. there's a far fence to her left, and she is leaning next to the tree. 

 My work was organized by placing the girl Jazmin in the rue of thirds. Making her the main focus of the picture. The tone on her legs were accidental and the picture is in focus. The shape of the picture is rectangular. This gives us the chances of having a whole body shot and length of the tree. 

I wasn't trying to communicate anything in his picture, but if this was somebody else's picture I would think that Jazmin is having a very pensive day, "daydreaming", or just wondering. She is looking throw the future. This picture is light

I think the work was successful. It portrait the message of a pensive girl very well. And the whole attention was on the girl.