"Freedom at last"

In this image  is see girl jumping up in the air. It seems something happened that made her really happy, exited for her life. The form of the girls body is very interesting for the human eye in my point. I think it would capture audience if the girls body would be straight.  Behind the main focus of the image we see some shapes which also adds to the prospective of the picture.

In this image i tried to have all her body. However, part of her leg and arm was cut. I believe if those two elements were there the picture would have been better composed. In the left hand side of the image we see that its has more light.  It seems that she was running and then jumped in direction of the sun. For the most part the image is in focus. I believe i dida good job of conveying the story of the image. This picture is clear, there are not object that can distract the audience of the main focus of the image.